Echoes Within

Submitted by jonjon_z on Wed, 02/09/2011 - 04:58

Originally the idea for this story was in response to Wolfchild's "Voices Alone" story at this thread.

Although I did like Wolfchild's story and thought it was well wriiten, I had a few disagreements particularly his opinion what might have gone through Eli's mind when she first met Oskar at the jungle gym. At the end of my post I made the comment, "Of course this is your story and viewpoint. I would have written it entirely differently." to which he replied, "Then, by all means - you should. :)"

I took this as a challenge and what you see here is the result.

I'm staying true to the concept, "What would Eli be thinking thoughout the film where she was present?" Although this is a story in response to another story it should be good as a standalone whether or not you've read Wolfchild's "Voices Alone". I highly recommend reading it it is an excellent story. I just happen to have a different take.

So without further adieu I present, "Echoes Within"