I'm glad you still like it. Chapters 37 and 38 were a kind of experiment. Other than the invasion of the Dawson home by "The four" I hadn't written much in the way of coreographed action, and I wanted to try my hand at it again.Daniel Ether wrote:so i finaly managed to get myself time to read on. i stoped at chapter 34 and it felt like an eternity
so here i am at the end of chapter 38! WHAT A THRILLER! I am really glad that Oskar is back with Eli and the others. There where a few quite gruesome moments:oh god... the horror Adrian...HANNAH!! For a second, she thought Oskar was having a heart attack. Then all she could see was copper spikes all around her, and a man with cold blue-gray eyes staring down at her. Then, as she floated higher in the room, she saw Oskar, a black hood over his head, spread-eagled across the bed, covered with blood.
and Hannah:oh noShe felt Hannah jerk, then go limp on her back. And suddenly she was gone. She heard the sharp crack of the rifle a second later.
after that, i nearly couldn't wait for the internetside to build ub! i simply cant imagine how it must had felt to wait weeks (!) for the next chapter
But there where also awesome happy moments of course:Eli giggled as Hannah’s ears continued to grow. They didn’t stop until they had reached their full pixie glory.
and this one made really laugh:Sava is the best.“Enough! I’ll be fine just as I am. Please….” He backed away from them slowly.
“Gotcha!” They both doubled over in laughter.
“You’re way too easy, Oskar.” Hannah was laughing so hard, she had tears in her eyes.
Sava rolled his eyes. “Ready, Doctor?"
By the way, Savas inner monolog was really good and very touching. Even its again such a cliffhanger here at the end of chapter 38, i have to read now finaly "Elis Protector".
Im afraid i sound like a broken record but im enjoying reading this more and more. really awesome
Sava's monolog took a bit of time, because his character was well-developed by this point in the story, and I wanted his thoughts on Eli to be completely consistent with his character. I'm especially glad you didn't have any problems with it in that respect.